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Magnolia Cassabella



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User Name: [La Luna]

Character name: Magnolia Dawn Cassabella (Maggie)

Mutant Name: Reaper

Birthday: November 10

Abilities/powers: She quite literally has the kiss of death. All of her bodily fluids are deathly poisonous to all living things. As she refines her powers she learns how to control the toxicity of her bodily fluids, all except for her blood which will always be deadly. If you touch her for a few seconds you will only get dizzy or nauseous, a minute might make you pass out but any more and you will likely be dead or if your lucky in a coma. The toxins stay in your system, so it would build up over time.

Sex: Female

Age: 18

General appearance: She has auburn ringlets and straight bangs that frame her face. She hair reaches down to the small of her back, just above her slim waist. She's about 5'5" and tiny, weighing about 118 pounds. She has big round puppy dog hazel eyes and billions of freckles. She's very petite and has a soft air about her. She looks normal and all, except for her deathly pale skin and purple lips, the color they look when you die. She hates that about her. She wears warm, soft, pastel colored clothes. Such as skirts, sweaters, cardigans, ballet flats, headbands and worn soft jeans.

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Personality: Magnolia is scared of becoming close to people. She doesn't like to get close to people by chance of her killing them. When you crack her thick shell, which is a feat in its self, you'll find she's sarcastic, funny, nice and sweet. No one has ever been able to get through to her. If she feels like she's getting close to you she will pull away and not talk to you for a while.
 
Special Skills: Maggie plays the flute and harp. She has a alright aim with a gun since her dad taught her when she was around 11, he had hunted often and brought her along sometimes since her little brother was better behind the computer.

Place of birth: Old Quebec in the providence of Quebec, Canada
  
Weapon(s) of choice: Gun
 
Medical information: No regular Human medication has a effect on her
 
Brief History: When Maggie was seven her powers developed. Before that she had been friendly and talkative, she only stopped becoming friendly with people because it usually ended in her killing them. Not realizing what she was doing she slowly killed off everyone she loved, all her family and friends included. Everyone able to take care of her or there for her died by the time she was nine. The first person she killed was her father they where hunting together in their summer house in the country and her touched her blood when she received a cut to the head. She was put in a boarding school by the last one to die her Aunt Dee, her favorite aunt. She started to realize it was her body fluids that killed people, such as her sweat, a kiss on the cheek, if they shared food with her or touched her blood. It was then she receded from the world and into her own sad up one. All of the killing had scared her causing her to distort her view of the world, it depressed her, but to the point of suicide. She eventually shook out of the depression when she realized she was holding a knife against her chest and was about to kill herself. That moment scared her even more making her pull away her more from the world and from the people in it. She will talk to you but getting close is out of the question. She's polite enough though.
 
Relatives: All are dead, she killed them.

How long your character has been in the mansion: A little while

Current Clothes: She is wearing a off-white lace, floral patterned dress, with flip flops and golden topaz dangling earrings. Two sections of her hair are pulled back and pinned together at the back of her head. She had forgotten to put on make-up, exposing the pale skin and purple lips she hates to show.
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      Relation Chart: 1-Better watch out 5-Neutral 10-Un-likely to happen but your amazing!



Daniela Morgan-5 Doesn't really know her

Shade-5 Doesn't really know him

Camille Anderson-5 Doesn't really know her

Light Arely Tilar-5 Doesn't really know her

Shana Grace Tilar-5 Doesn't really know her

Adrianne Wagner-5 Doesn't really know her

Mihir Proudclaw- 0 She's currently so confused about what happened with them, all she know's is that he hurt her.

Kyle Bedlington-5 Doesn't really know him

Valerie K. Sprouse-5 Doesn't really know her

Elizabeth Charms-5 Doesn't really know her

Korvka Shostakovich-5 Doesn't really know her

Vladimir Shostakovich-7 He's nice to her and pretty cool for a giant Russian.

Justin Alphar-5 Hasn't really talked to him

Endelyn Hagan- 5 Hasn't really talked to her

Nathan White-6 He is pretty nice

Lucas Alexander-4 Eh..






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2011-04-29 [Duredhel]: Ok the char is not bad, but there's some things I'd retouch. As usual, the power, I'd say tone it down a bit and set up a scale. For example, no friggin way she can kill someone by blowing a kiss. Maybe if she touches you for a split second, you feel nauseous and dizzy, a few seconds you get a headache and lose your balance, a minute might make you pass out, and a few minutes could put you in a coma or kill you. Toxins can also build over time so several small touches can count as a big one. The other thing is... she hasn't had a normal conversation with anyone since she was 14... who the hell tattoo'd her? I've worked at a parlor and we didn't tattoo a 14 year old on their own. What's more, since her power started out early, she could've killed the tattoo artist. Also, there's nothing in her history to indicate she'd even know how to handle a gun or a bow and arrow. These are both tools that require training to be used appropriately or a lot of practice. I doubt she's had any of those, specially at 17 and without having had constant interaction with someone. Daniela, for example, has a gun but she just found it, she's a horrible shot, she closes her eyes and looks away when she shoots and the recoil sends it shooting up. So yah, look into that.

2011-04-29 [La Luna]: OKay, Thanks Dur, I'll work on it.

2011-04-29 [La Luna]: Like this?

2011-04-29 [Duredhel]: Aye, it looks good. What kind of gun does she use tho? if her dad took her hunting, I imagine it's not a pistol.. can an 11 year old handle the recoil of a rifle? :/.
The other thing is "She has never even gotten her first kiss yet many have tried." It strikes me as Mary-sueish (but I might be wrong). What kind of world is this where people try to kiss girls that won't talk to them? In any case, neither of those are deal breakers, so I say it's good, not perfect, but good.

2011-04-29 [La Luna]: Ah, yeah, I get it That kiss thing was from before I had other stuff, forgot to take it out xP

2011-05-01 [Duredhel]: So... what exactly happened between Light & Magnolia for her to think the former is an egotistic bitch? O,o

... remember RPing 101... character's can't read other character's sheets.

2011-05-01 [La Luna]: She watches others interact and Light usually acts like that

2011-05-01 [Duredhel]: She does? O,o

2011-05-01 [La Luna]: Yes, It kinda keeps her from going crazy and she is fairly Judgmental

2011-05-01 [Figgy]: Light is usually pretty quiet XD She really only talks if she has alcohol in her system or she's with Shade or Addy, or trying to piss off Shana. She definitely doesn't go around being boastful, though she is a bitch XD

2011-05-01 [Figgy]: I get if your character thinks that, maybe, but is there a specific instance that she saw her, maybe intoxicated, picking on Shana or something? That would make more sense.

2011-05-01 [La Luna]: Ah, I should fix that to say she has a bad attitude

2011-05-01 [Figgy]: Better XD

2011-05-01 [La Luna]: xP Sorry

2011-05-01 [Duredhel]: It's usually good to watch out for what's called metagaming. Before writing what your character knows or thinks, ask yourself "does my character know this because *I* know this? if not.. when did she witness or hear something that would make her think this way?"

2011-05-01 [La Luna]: Oh, Thank you Dur, that'll help.

2011-05-09 [Veltzeh]: Wait, how long has Magnolia been in the mansion?

2011-05-09 [La Luna]: Um, maybe a week? I'm not sure, Figgy would probably know..

2011-05-11 [Duredhel]: Ok yeah :/ seriously, we talked about metagaming before, now we're gonna talk about sticking to your story.

Magnolia acts absolutely nothing like her bio says she should act. Making your character a shut-in or shy is not making ONE post in which she's shy and then she opens up to everyone. Seriously, this is not only for you Luna, but for a LOT of the newer players, stick to what you write. If you want character development, that's great, but it doesn't happen over a post, or an hour, or a day. Characters change over weeks, months or years.

I get that you, Basco, Danboo and Arctic are just beginners, which is why we get so adamant about trying to coach you, we want to hold the level of RPing here to a high standard. If you write something in personality, stick through with it. At the risk of tooting my own horn, check how Dani plays out, and then consider you've made out Magnolia to be much more extremely introverted than her in the bio.

2011-05-11 [La Luna]: Sorry Duredhel! I really need to work on this, I'll try to stick to it some more!

2011-05-16 [Duredhel]: XD Seems Magnolia always likes the last person she's talked to best.

2011-05-16 [La Luna]: She doesn't really talk so when ever she does it makes her like them more XP

2011-05-16 [Duredhel]: O,o... evidence points to the contrary.

2011-05-16 [La Luna]: Wait what?

2012-03-30 [La Luna]: O: Her birthday passed! Better update that age!

2012-09-15 [Duredhel]: <img100*0:https://dl.dropbox.com/u/11358122/RP/Maggie2.png>

2012-09-15 [La Luna]: Awww! She's so cute :3 Thanks Dur! I love it!

2012-10-17 [La Luna]: Mag is in the Den I believe, waiting on Ivan

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